Ask for a raise in clear words

The message only has to open the conversation. Say what you want to discuss and suggest a time.

Before and after

Pay talk

You wrote

i think i should get more money because i did a lot this year, can we talk about it

OnKey rewrite

I'd like to discuss my salary. This year I've taken on more responsibility, and I'd like to talk about adjusting my pay to reflect that. Could we find a time to meet?

Sample text, written by hand to show the idea. Results in the app vary.

What to include

Ask for a meeting, not a number, in the first message.
Keep it confident, not demanding.
Add your own real examples before you send.

How to do it with OnKey

Write it your way. Rough is fine. Type it in the app you are already using.
Switch to OnKey and use Change tone. Hold the globe key, pick OnKey, then tap the action on the strip.
Set the tone. Try Confident for this one.
Read it, then Insert. Edit anything you like before you send. Undo brings your draft back.